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Sierra Westerholm's avatar

Nice job! Haha, solid message with some rapper flares - go girl!

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Merissa Nicole's avatar

Thank youuu 😆😎

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Bob Hannaford's avatar

That’s a good poem.

It has a bit of a flavor of Rapping.

You deserve a rapper‘s name.

I christen thee Rapper M & N.

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Merissa Nicole's avatar

Haha, why thank you! Yep, it was intended to sound a bit like rapping. That's funny I actually call myself "M & N" sometimes 😆

Happy you enjoyed the poem!

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Sakari's avatar

Most authentic poem from Merissa I’ve read so far

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M.L. Cole | The Beacon Road's avatar

Beautiful!💖

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Merissa Nicole's avatar

Thank you! 🙏😊

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Jonathan Matei's avatar

This is so powerful! 🔥 The way you weave faith and purpose into your writing really makes it stand out.

It’s a reminder that we’re called to something greater, and that’s what keeps us moving forward. I love the line about not being afraid of the dark—so much truth in that.

Do you ever go back and reread your older writings to see how far you've grown? Appreciate you sharing this!

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